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Hiya, Youreit! I'm here to review your story! Here goes: There was a various assortment of beer, vodka, whiskey, and whatever vine the parents were stupid enough to leave on ...

Hiya there! Becca here! M'kay, I almost didn't read this becuase it's in on big clump. This will put most people off becuase when they see it, it's like a ...

Hiya Beth! My name's Becca! Glad to see you're back, even though I wasn't a member at the time or know you. So tell us... do you have an awesome ...

Heya Carl! I'm Becca! There's a few ways to make some friends! First is by groups. At the top of the page click on 'groups' and then find a group ...

Please keep in mind that I'm doing this because they are cute and it's just for fun. With that in mind, please enjoy these not so expertly took photos! We ...

Go Evi! Congratulations.

Hiya Curly! I was crouching down into the cool sheets, still in my boxers and white T-shirt. The breeze from the porch blew in the room as I stared at ...

Hiya Cotton! I'm Becca! Interesting story you've got here, but first nitpicks! Nitpicks; Today was the last day of the working, five-day week – which meant that tonight was Friday ...

Hello Merlin, I'm Becca! I am here today to rip your work to shreds. *evil laugh* Kidding! But seriously... Nitpicks; The sun was descending towards evening and shining through his ...

Hey Keeper! Welcome to YWS! How are you liking it so far? What kind of fantasy do you like to write? Things about other wolds? Mystical creatures? Etc. Do you ...

Hi!! Nitpicks; Christmas Eve, and I sit shivering in the trenches, my body covered in frozen mud. Try: It was Christmas Eve... Explosions all around me near [nearly.] tear through ...

Heya! Okay, first thing: you have a really good idea here. I read the first chapter, and it was really good. Alrightie, let's get started: Nitpicks; I didn't have to ...

Hiya Daft Vader! I'm Becca, and here to critique your work! Let's get started! Nitpicks; Instead of its brother and sister planets in the Elexus system; Lexus and Harbourne, it ...

heyya hiya! Me again! Hey, I have a friend named Lydia! Lydia watched as the porcelain ballerina twirled gracefully around to the soft, tinkling music, never once breaking her faultless ...

Hi Alyssa! It's nice to see you. Even though I've never met you, It's still nice to see you! :D Anyways, I'm Becca or doodle, whichever you prefer. Int-er-esting start ...